New Design showed in our Dometix Shanghai 2023
2023/12/05

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New Design showed in our Dometix Shanghai 2023
"New designs were showcased at our Dometix Shanghai 2023 (Exhibition)."
Key Adjustments for Accuracy & Naturalness:
- Grammar & Voice: Changed "showed" (active, incorrect usage here) to "were showcased" (passive voice), which is more formal and appropriate for describing product displays at exhibitions.
- Plurality: Used "New designs" (plural) instead of "New Design" (singular) – this aligns with common scenarios where multiple new designs are presented at a trade show.
- Preposition: Replaced "in" with "at" – "at" is the standard preposition for specifying events (e.g., exhibitions, conferences) like "Dometix Shanghai 2023."
- Clarity (Optional): Adding "(Exhibition)" after "Dometix Shanghai 2023" helps readers immediately recognize it as a trade show, if the name isn’t widely known.