company news about New Design showed in our Dometix Shanghai 2023

New Design showed in our Dometix Shanghai 2023

"New designs were showcased at our Dometix Shanghai 2023 (Exhibition)."

Key Adjustments for Accuracy & Naturalness:

• Grammar & Voice: Changed "showed" (active, incorrect usage here) to "were showcased" (passive voice), which is more formal and appropriate for describing product displays at exhibitions.
• Plurality: Used "New designs" (plural) instead of "New Design" (singular) – this aligns with common scenarios where multiple new designs are presented at a trade show.
• Preposition: Replaced "in" with "at" – "at" is the standard preposition for specifying events (e.g., exhibitions, conferences) like "Dometix Shanghai 2023."
• Clarity (Optional): Adding "(Exhibition)" after "Dometix Shanghai 2023" helps readers immediately recognize it as a trade show, if the name isn’t widely known.